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Trapped in the Ghost Zone-2

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"Ladies and Gentlemen welcome to the Ghost Zone," Danny announced.
"What?" Everyone screamed.
"I didn't wish to go to the Ghost Zone!" Star cried, before bursting into tears.
"Yeah, Desiree may grant your wishes but not always in the way you think," Danny said calmly. "So now we are trapped in the Ghost Zone."
With that, everyone (with the exception of Danny, Sam, and Tucker) started screaming and running around in circles.
"EVERYONE CALM DOWN!" Danny hollered.
Everyone skidded to a stop and stared at him.
"NOW ALL OF YOU SIT DOWN AND SHUT UP!" Danny yelled.
Everyone quickly sat down, even Danny's parents. No one liked the look in Danny's eyes. His eyes seemed to say "if you don't do what I say, I'm going to kill you."
Danny stared pacing and muttering to himself. "Great, just great. How am I suppose to get everyone out of here without using my powers? Let's see ..." After a few minuets he turned to Sam and Tucker. "So that over there is Fright Night's castle," he said pointing to a large floating castle.
"So that means that opposite side of the Ghost Zone from where the Fenton Ghost Portal is," Danny said. "But we can't reach it because we can't fly."
"So what are we going to do?" Tucker asked.
"Well... we could go to Frostbite, I'm sure he would help us," Danny said. "The only problem is that it's on the opposite side of the Ghost Zone also."
"And don't we need to fly to get there," Tucker asked.
"Nope," Danny said happily. "You see, the path we are on is a natural path though the Ghost Zone and it leads right to Frostbite."
"Wait a minute, who is this Frostbite," Danny's mom Maddie asked, completely confused.
"He's a friend of mine," Danny said quickly, before changing the subject. "Mom, Dad, Valerie how many ecto weapons do you have?"
"What makes you think I have any weapons," Valerie asked nervously.
Danny sighed and said impatiently. "Look Valerie, I know all about your job, now do you have any weapons with you?"
Valerie stared at him in shock before sighing and pulling off her backpack. She looked inside, and gasped. "All my weapons are gone!"
"Ours to!" Maddie exclaimed, after failing to activate her jumpsuit weapons.
Danny quickly pulled off his backpack. He knelt down, looked inside, and frowned. "That's odd." He mumbled.
"What?" Sam asked, while walking over to him to peek over his shoulder.
"All of your weapons are gone but mine are still here," Danny said. "Desiree must be playing tricks again."
"What weapons do you have?" She asked.
"I have the Fenton Thermos."
"Well that's good," Tucker said.
Danny nodded and turned to everyone else. "Okay, so the plan is that were going to Frostbites. He is the only one that I trust to get us home, but it is a long walk. It may be a few days before we get there. You all are going to have to do what I say," Danny explained calmly.
"Why should we follow you, Fenton?" Dash asked, crossing his arms.
Danny turned to Dash and said calmly but with a hint of steal in his voice. "Dash do you know anything about the Ghost Zone?"
"Well, no," Dash said.
"Do you know your way around the Ghost Zone?" Danny asked.
Dash shook his head.
"Have you ever even been inside the Ghost Zone before today?" Danny asked, the annoyance in his voice was clear.
"And I suppose you have?" Dash snorted.
"Yes, many times," Danny said passively.
"WHAT!" Maddie exclaimed. "You went into the Ghost Zone with out telling us!"
"Look mom the first time was an accident, and then I just wanted to go back, so I did," Danny said nervously. "Just be thankful that I have been in the Ghost Zone or we would be wandering around this place completely lost."
Maddie calmed down a little bit, but only slightly.
Danny bent down to his backpack and pulled out some things that looked like Blue Tooth's.
"Hey where did you get the Fenton Phones?" Jack asked. He had been wondering where those things had disappeared to.
"Um, I borrowed them," Danny said rubbing the back of his neck. He was now grateful that he had grabbed so many of those yesterday. He quickly handed out two for each person.
"Why are you giving us ugly earrings?" Paulina asked, looking at them in disgust.
"They're not earrings, Paulina. They are designed to filter out spectral noise. Since we are in the Ghost Zone these could be useful. Plus, we might run into Ember, and if we do I really don't want all of you under her spell."
Paulina hesitantly stuck the 'earrings' in her ears.  
"Now, we are going to need food, does anyone have any left over lunch with them?" Danny asked.
Everyone started shifting though their stuff. A few of them brought out some items but it was not much.
All together, they had 10 items.
"Okay, so it's going to take at least a week to make it across the ghost zone," Danny explained. "So that means that we should only eat one of these a day, because it could take longer then a week. I really don't want us running out of food."
"What about water?" Mr. Lancer asked.
"Follow me," Danny said standing up. He walked over to a medium sized bolder and pushed it aside.
Everyone walked over, and there under the rock was water.
"The only thing that ghost's need is water," Danny explained. "They can go without it, but it weakens them.
"How do you know all this?" Maddie asked. "Your father and I didn't even know that."
"I have friends in the Ghost Zone that tell me lot's of thing about Ghosts," Danny said rubbing the back of his neck. "Not all ghosts are evil Mom."
Maddie looked at her son in complete shock. How did he know so much and why did he go in the Ghost Zone so often. Maddie realized that there was a lot more to her son than she knew.
"Okay, we should get going," Danny said putting the food in his back pack, and standing up.
"Wait, why do you get to carry the food? How do we know you wont eat all of it?" Dash said.
"Because Dash, I'm not an idiot, we need this food to survive and eating it all at once will get us nowhere," Danny sighed. "Plus, I don't trust many of you to not eat it all at once so I'm keeping the food. Now let's get going."
Once everyone was ready they set off.
"What's with all the doors?" Kwan asked.
"The doors go to many different places," Danny explained. "Some of them are portals to earth, some lead to a Ghosts layer, and some are even portals though time."
"Oh," Kwan said.
They had been walking for 2 hours when Danny said that they should stop and take a rest. No one argued, they just dropped to the ground.
"I think that we should stop every 2 hours and rest. It seams that is as longest as you guys can do at a time." Danny said.
Everyone just nodded, too tired to protest, or make a retort about his comment.  
After a few minutes rest, Danny, Sam, and Tucker went off to talk. Dash, Paulina, Star, and Kwan huddled up in a group, which left Mr. Lancer and Danny's parents to talk.
"Danny, what were you thinking, telling them about the Ghost Zone!" Sam whispered angrily. "You are not supposed to know more about this place then your mom and Dad. People could start getting suspicious."
"I'm sorry, but I couldn't just let someone else take the lead; they would have gotten us lost." Danny whispered back.
"What if a ghost attacks, you won't be able to go ghost to stop them," Tucker asked.
"Well then I guess I just have to fight them in human form, or just suck them into the thermos," Danny replied. "Looks like I'm going to have a hard time keeping my secret here."
"Yeah, but don't worry dude we will be right by your side the whole way," Tucker said putting a hand on Danny.
"That goes for me too," Sam said also putting a hand on Danny.
"Thanks guys," Danny said, smiling at them.
Meanwhile
"I can't believe that we have to take orders from Fenturd," Dash said angrily.
"Just be grateful that someone here knows his way around the Ghost Zone." Valerie said.
Dash just grumbled.
"You know I have never seen Danny take charge like this before," Valerie said. "The only other time he took charge was when our parents got kidnapped."
"Yeah and did you see the look in his eyes when he told us to shut up." Star winced. "It was kinda creepy."
"Yeah if looks could kill we would have been a smoldering pile of ashes," Valerie said.
"I still don't think it's a good idea to follow Fenton," Dash grumbled.
"Oh, just shut up Dash," Valerie said angrily.
Meanwhile
"I can't believe that Danny has been in the Ghost Zone before!" Maddie exclaimed.
"I wonder why he didn't tell us?" Jack wondered sadly.
"Mr. and Ms. Fenton, have you been inside the Ghost Zone before?" Mr. Lancer asked.
"Well... no," Maddie said, looking down at her feet.
"You mean that you have a working ghost portal, and you never went in it?" Mr. Lancer asked, completely shocked.
"We didn't think it was safe," Maddie explained. "I mean, we're ghost hunters and we didn't think it was the best idea to go in there."
"Yes, I would see why that might be a bad thing," Mr. Lancer said. "You know, I am actually really surprised at Daniel. I never thought he would be the one to take charge like this. He is usually the quiet and shy one."
"Yeah I'm beginning to think that there is more to our boy then we thought," Maddie said.
About a half an hour later Danny stood up and said. "We need to get going."
Everyone groaned but got up.
While they were walking, Danny's mom and dad asked him lots of questions about the Ghost Zone. Danny had to be very careful about what he said; he didn't want them to get suspicious.
After hours of walking, Danny looked at his watch; it was about 11:00 pm.
"We should stop for the night," Danny yawned.
"It's nighttime?" Dash asked, scratching his head in confusion.
Everyone laughed and Dashe's cheeks grew red.
"Yes Dash, it's night time," Danny said, still laughing. "The Ghost Zone doesn't have a sun so there is no dark, just light. Now we need to get some rest. We are going to be going by Sulkers Island tomorrow, and we need to be rested up just in case we need to run."
"Why would we need to run?" Kwan asked.
"We might run into Skulker and trust me, you may have to run to get away from him," Danny explained.
"Oh," Kwan mumbled.
"All right everyone, get some rest, it's going to be a long day tomorrow," Danny sighed.
The next chapter to, Trapped in the Ghost Zone.

I am trying to go though each chapter and edit it, so it is a little diffrent then the one on FFN. It's the same story, just (hopefully) better grammar.
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Awesome! When is the next installment going to be?